Editing Questions: Narrative
Name of Reviewed Individual: Akosua Antwi
1. What are the strengths of your partner’s essay? Why? She was very descriptive and really let the reader in to what her thoughts and belifs are.
2. What areas could use improvements? In other words, what suggestions can you give your partner that will help his/her paper improve? Give more example of the times she was talking about
3. What is your favorite literary device used in your partner’s essay? imagery
4. What is the part of the paper that stands out as the most "catchy" or important?
I liked how i could picture the situations she was decribing
Name of Reviewed Individual: Akosua Antwi
1. What are the strengths of your partner’s essay? Why? She was very descriptive and really let the reader in to what her thoughts and belifs are.
2. What areas could use improvements? In other words, what suggestions can you give your partner that will help his/her paper improve? Give more example of the times she was talking about
3. What is your favorite literary device used in your partner’s essay? imagery4. What is the part of the paper that stands out as the most "catchy" or important?
I liked how i could picture the situations she was decribing
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