Wednesday, February 29, 2012

ANSWER THE FOLLOWING ON YOUR BLOG1. Does this essay have an explicitly stated thesis? If so, what is it? If you believe the thesis is implied, paraphrase it in your own words.
I think its implied that she wants a man to understand how much the wife does on the dailey and that she wishes someone would do that for her.
2. Throughout the essay, Brady repeats the words “I want a wife.” What is the effect of this repetition? 
To explain she wants someone to take care of her.
3. Do you think Brady really wants the kind of wife she describes—does this ideal spouse
actually exist? Explain why you think Brady wrote this essay.
No, she was trying to explain how much a women does.

4. How does Brady define what it means to be a “wife”? How does she organize the many services a wife provides her husband and family? What do you think of Brady’s characterization of a wife and her responsibilities? How do you think she wants her readers to respond to this characterization? Why?
She defines it to be a woman who cooks, cleans, and takes care of the children.  I think that it sounds like it is set back in the day because it is, which makes it very sexist.

5. Write a letter to Brady responding to “I Want a Wife.” Let her know what you admire or don’t admire about the essay and the extent to which you consider it effective and/or persuasive.
 
Dear Brady,
I admire your outlook on how females do so much in the home.  I agree back in the day it was like that, but now in days i feel like women have more of a chioce to go out and get an education while the man can take on womens roles.
 

Friday, February 17, 2012

Little Red Riding Hood

Little Red Riding Hood
There once was a little girl who liked to wear red,
She kept a little red hood on the top of her head
One day she was going to see her grandma that was close to being dead
And brind some good food right up to her bed
There was a gangsta wolf hiding in the shadows
He wanted all her goodies something like a dude whos shallow
So he tried to get her walking down by the meddow
But she whooped his butt and said hell no
He tried to be sneaky and play like the grandma
Ate the old lady and chilled in her bed
And waited for the little girl who liked to wear red
She walked in they conversated a bit
But the wolf knew he had to be quick
He ate the everything the food the girl and all
Guess sometimes evil wins after all

Monday, February 6, 2012

word writing

Riding his new red bike, the young boy rode down the hard road.  Feeling ostentatious he tried to ride the ramp with the older kids.  As he sped up the ramp he hit the pavement with a smack to the ground. He started gushing blood from his mouth and nose. His nose fell off as we were rushing him to the hospital. And his face was looking as flat as a board. His bike went from splendid to bended in about 5 seconds.  To keep the blood from gushing everywhere he grabbed a washcloth from the bathroom. His mom telling him everything will be okay. She tells her son that she will buy him a scrumptious burger once all this was over. The quintessence of blueberry ice cream floats in his head as he blurs the line of conciseness. He spasms into a seizure and dies as the fantastic food goes to waste.